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ship manifesto: emily/jj [criminal minds]
Title: Femslash; FBI Style
Author: [info]lysachan
Paring: Emily/JJ
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Spoilers: Spoilers to Seasons 2 & 3.
A/N: Emily/JJ has become so very obvious during the past few months, and such an obvious paring deserves a ship manifesto. Big thank you to Shay for her input and suggestions. <3


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The Way to a Criminal Is Through His Mind

Criminal Minds is a CBS crime show that premiered in September 2005. The show revolves around the FBI's Behavior Analysis Unit (BAU), a team of profilers whose job is to catch serial killers all over the United States by profiling them.

Ratings-wise the show is a clear winner: it has been one of the best rated shows every Wednesday since its premier. But within critics it is clearly under-appreciated, and this is mostly because people tend to categorise it as a typical procedural. In my opinion, however, Criminal Minds is quite a lot more than that and cannot possibly be straightforwardly categorised. It is not another Law & Order, and it is nothing like CSI, or any other crime show out there for that matter. Criminal Minds is in a category of its own.

Being a sucker for crime shows and fascinated by serial killers, I tuned in right away in the beginning and have been a loyal follower ever since. Criminal Minds is crime drama at its best: the writing is fantastic (gets better and better by the episode), the cast is likable and the characters sympathetic. And then there is the 'holy femslash batman!subtext' which I will delve into in this manifesto.


The Not-So-Unknown Subjects

The Profiler

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Supervisory Special Agent Emily Prentiss joined the team in mid-Season 2. Emily's parents are highbrow diplomats, which made Aaron Hotchner, their team leader, especially doubt her sincerity in terms of joining the BAU. Eventually her name is cleared, however, and she proves herself more than worthy of the team's respect.

It was clear from the beginning that Emily is an incredibly good profiler (it is already evident in "Empty Planet", the episode where Emily first makes an appearance), and that she truly belongs with the BAU. She has an ability to empathise with the victims, to create a connection with them and to make them trust her.

...obviously, we are talking about the live victims here. Ahem.

We know bits and pieces about Emily's background. As was mentioned earlier, her parents are political figures, and most probably due to this Emily has stated, twice, that she loathes politics. For the same reason she seems to be rather well off, living in a rather big flat near the Capital Dome in Washington DC. It is probable that her relationship with her parents is not the best possible: in "Sex, Birth, Death", one of her reasons for hating politics is that it "tears families apart". Also, her interaction with her mother seems rather strained in "Honor Among Thieves".

Emily spent a lot of time in Middle Eastern countries growing up, she went to Yale, and, besides English, speaks at least three languages (Arabic, Spanish, and sort of Russian).

Emily is a self-proclaimed nerd. She also says that, unlike most people, she is good at compartmentalising, which makes it easier for her to deal with the horrors the team faces everyday. At the same time, however, she has more than once wondered what exactly separates them from the killers they try to catch, since they are catching the unsubs (Unknown Subject) by attempting to identify with them.

On a completely shallow note, then, Emily also often dresses in fantastically butchy clothes & accessories (cargo trousers! Army boots! Jeans! James Bond watch!), and her swagger has been known to distract fangirls all over the globe.


The Media Liaison

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Unlike the rest of the team, Supervisory Special Agent Jennifer "JJ" Jareau is not actually a profiler. Her specialty is media relations, which means she works as a unit liaison – a link between the team and the rest of the world. Her job also entails picking the cases for the team from all files that come to her desk. Despite perhaps feeling like an outsider at times, in "North Mammon" JJ states that becoming a profiler is not something she particularly wants: she likes being the one the families and people can turn to. The team is extremely important to her, however, and she has actually compared it to family.

When the show premiered, JJ's role was pathetically small, but towards the end of Season 1, and especially from Season 2 onwards, her role has become just as essential as the others'. Now she spends more and more time in the field with the rest of the team, and on many occasions she is able to take part in the actual profiling, as she has picked up the basics along the way & has good observational skills.

JJ is not the opposite of Emily only when it comes to looks. Their backgrounds could not be more different: JJ grew up in a small town called East Allegheny in Pennsylvania which, according to her, was "too small for a bowling alley". She was captain of the varsity soccer team in high school and got an athletic scholarship, because that was the only way to college. She hated the small town mentality and simply wanted to get away from it all.

Other small tidbits that we know about her are that she is scared of woods, owns everyone else at darts, used to collect butterflies when she was little, and is a huge fan of the Washington Redskins.


Wardrobe Swapping and Dirty Text Messages


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I had a clear theory in my head when I began working on this manifesto and watching through the 2.5 seasons worth of episodes that have aired so far. The way I saw it, the development of the Emily/JJ ship is a nicely straightforward one. What I mean by this, is that things start out slowly but surely, they develop and become more and more obvious, and eventually culminate to the femslashy magnificence that is most of Season 3.

I am happy to say that, as the following will hopefully prove to you as well, I was not too far off from the truth.


Bring on the Femslashy Goodness, I Say

Season 1 is, understandably, a femslash light season. JJ's role being fairly small and Emily's absence are obvious drawbacks, and we need to wait till halfway Season 2 before things start heating up.

It is obvious from the moment Emily joins the team that sparks are flying. In "Lessons Learned" (Emily's first real episode with the team) JJ says, smiling brightly, that she has been briefing her on protocol, thus it is clear they get along well. Also, in general, the two have never fought or bickered in any way; there seems to be a mutual respect and understanding between them.

"Sex, Birth, Death" (two episodes later) establishes a characteristic of the Emily/JJ relationship I like to call 'the eyeshag factor'. The more you pay attention to their communication and interaction, the more you realise the constant eye contact between them. The eye-shagging becomes more and more overt by the episode, and by mid-Season 3 it reaches the 'we could just as well be having sex right now' stage.

While the chemistry between Emily and JJ is definitely detectable right after Emily's first appearance, it is not until "Revelations" that we get our first glimpse at the obviousness of this paring.

JJ and Reid get separated while chasing down an unsub on the grounds of a remote farm, resulting in the kidnapping of Reid and JJ needing to gun down a pack of vicious dogs. When eventually the rest of the team arrive, Emily and Derek Morgan (one of the profilers) find JJ in a state of shock.

Emily is immediately by her side, her hands reaching for the blonde, but not quite touching. And when they need to ask JJ about Reid and his whereabouts, Emily is the only one who can get through to her:


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Morgan: JJ, where's Reid?
JJ: [not listening] [The dogs] just completely tore her apart. There's nothing even left-
Emily: JJ, look at me. Look at me.
[JJ finally turns to Emily]

In it simplicity, this moment is loaded with femslashy subtext: JJ is able to break through her state of shock only when she hears Emily's voice and looks her in the eye.

The femslashiness of the episode culminates in a scene where JJ is angsting alone in the room when Emily shows up (JJ's hips are canted in a very sexy manner as she leans over a sink; how Emily is even able to form coherent sentences is beyond me). Emily seems to know exactly how to handle the other woman, and the look in her eyes is nothing short of gentle. She also seems to be a person JJ feels she can talk to:


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JJ: Emily. [Emily turns back] How come none of this gets to you?
Emily: What do you mean?
JJ: [in wonder] You came off a desk job. Now suddenly you're...in the field surrounded by mutilated bodies and...you don't even flinch.

Not only are JJ's eyes roaming all over Emily and giving a whole new meaning to "eye shag", but she actually calls Emily by her first name. Up to that point, no one has done that, since most of the time the team refer to her as 'Prentiss'. Also, since then only Reid has used Emily's first name, and even that was not to her face.

The name detail might not be so significant if it did not work the other way around as well: in the entire two-and-a-half-season-long run of Criminal Minds, no one has referred to the media liaison by her first name only. No one but Emily, that is. In the Season 3 episode "Scared to Death" Emily slips and suddenly introduces JJ as simply 'Jennifer'.

Emily has a history of such, somewhat revealing, slips. In "Jones" the two women are interrogating a man who supposedly raped a woman in the past. When he denies everything and claims he does not have a clue what they are talking about, Emily says something interesting:

Emily: Someone accuses me of rape, I'm gonna remember her name.

Yes, it could simply be a figure of speech, but to me it sounds more like a Freudian slip. And a rather obvious slip at that, too.


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The events of "Revelations" seem to do the trick, since the interaction between Emily & JJ at least doubles. In "Fear and Loathing", during a profile briefing, JJ suddenly receives a text message. She reads it, glances at Emily (who is behind a pillar, so we cannot actually see her face) and stands up, smiling. Sending dirty text messages during briefings, Emily?

Similarly, "Distress" could just as well be called "Can't Take My Eyes off You: the Emily/JJ eye shag fest", while "Open Season" has JJ overtly WINKING at Emily in a bar – and not to mention JJ's keen interest in Emily's family stories when everyone else seems to be ignoring her completely. Also, in "No Way Out, Part II" Emily continues with the innuendoes:

[after a woman asks her whether it is wrong to love a serial killer]
Emily: [unhesitatingly] You don't choose who you fall in love with.

I would give my right arm to see JJ's reaction shot to that as she is standing right next to her. In any case, Season 2 wraps up with an extremely nice promise of what is yet to come.


It's Canon, Baby!

Season 3 is the season of the gay. It is a season that has shed all doubts of the relationship between Emily and JJ being anything but the femslashy, lesbian type. And this trend kicks off right away in the season premier.

Although "Doubt" was actually filmed during Season 2, it works perfectly as the Season 3 premier when it comes to the Emily/JJ ship. The utter lack of personal space, as well as the frequent eye shagging, continue, and we get another carefully worded hint of exactly what team the two play for:


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[walking extremely close together on a college campus; seriously, they could be holding hands]
Emily: It's a weird age. You wanna be treated like an adult, but you're still used to someone else solving your problems for you.
JJ: [glancing at Emily, chuckling] All I remember is trying to figure out who I was.

In other words: "In college I had a torrid love affair with my female roommate and I've been a skirt chaser ever since." Emily probably gets the drill, since she looks downright jealous when a female student suddenly hugs JJ after the blonde has admitted that they have someone in custody.

In "Birth and Death" the team is severely splintered as Hotch applies for a transfer, Gideon (another profiler) simply takes off, and Emily resigns. When, eventually, Hotch and Emily go and rejoin the remaining three members, Emily's eyes are only on JJ – and vice versa. And they grin like idiots.


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The same episode ends with Emily being hit around the head with a plank of wood, causing a small head wound. When the team rushes in to save her, JJ is at Emily's side, asking if she is okay. It looks like she wants to touch Emily, her hand reaching towards her, but eventually she decides only to brush her arm. I bet she figured she would just wait until they got home in order to properly console the other woman.

There are three special cases of Criminal Minds, a sort of a holy trinity of Emily/JJ episodes. "Revelations", especially with its overt eye sex, is the first corner of the triangle, the second being "Children of the Dark". This is also an episode that—in my mind—carries the name of "Emily & JJ Come to the Conclusion That They Will Have Kids".

Not only do the women spent almost the entire episode together, but this episode also brings the femslash between them on a whole new level. It is 40 minutes of eye shagging, invading the other's personal space, and pure flirting.

But the reason why Emily/JJ is so canon after this episode takes place in the end. Emily bonds with a girl, Carrie, who survived a violent attack by the unsubs – an attack which also left her an orphan. When, on the way home, Emily angsts about Carrie going to live with her distant relatives, JJ suddenly makes an appearance and sits opposite her:


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[suspiciously romantic piano/violin music starts playing]
JJ: [quietly] Are you okay?
Emily: [not very convincingly] Yeah.
[long pause & eye shagging]
JJ: They're good people. Carrie's family.
Emily: Good. [more eye shagging] I'm glad.
JJ: [totally flirting] I think it's a good idea, though.
Emily: What's that?
JJ: [softly] You...kids...I can see it.
Emily: [uncertain smile] Yeah?
JJ: *nods in a very flirty way*
[Emily smiles & THE eye shag off all eye shags takes place]

If this was not a primetime show on American network television, JJ's line would have been "You...me...kids." There is no way that dialogue and the flirty looks can be misinterpreted; and they could just as well be having sex in the middle of the plane, the eye shagging is so, very obvious.

As if the episode was not femslashtastic as it is, there is yet another intriguing—and completely gay—attribute of the Emily/JJ ship that becomes apparent: wardrobe swapping. Yes, Emily & JJ visit each other's wardrobe on a regular basis, it seems.


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Emily sports a nice, purple shirt in "No Way Out, Part II", the same shirt JJ can be seen wearing in "Children of the Dark". But it does not end there. Emily's green shirt from "Doubt" is on JJ in "Lucky", and Emily is obviously wearing JJ's jacket in "Birthright", because it looks way too small on her, and JJ is wearing it herself in the very same episode.


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One can wonder what happened to JJ's own shirts and Emily's jacket. Or, why exactly JJ happened to be at Emily's place in the morning when she needed to get dressed in the first place.


It Is All about the Touching

After "Children in the Dark" the interaction between the two women seems to be more familiar, more intimate. Emily touches JJ more (usually rather unnecessarily), like for instance in "Seven Seconds", and in group scenes their eyes find each other's on regular intervals, "About Face" being a lovely example of the latter. It is worth noting that the profilers very rarely touch each other, so the fact that Emily's hands seem to constantly be on JJ speaks volumes.


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Emily also becomes more protective of JJ, and the beginning of this trend can clearly be detected in "Lucky": the team raid the unsub's house, but at first nothing can be found. When a noise can be heard coming from the basement, Emily & JJ—who had been standing in the kitchen—join the rest of the team at the end of a hallway. But although it is JJ who is closer to the doorway and in all probability should come down the corridor first, it is actually Emily who leads the way, JJ trailing close behind her.

Emily's protectiveness continues in "Penelope", an episode that brings a whole new dimension to the already obvious femslash content. "Penelope" is also the third episode of the holy trinity, because if someone still had any doubts before this, after seeing "Penelope" those doubts most certainly flew out the window.

Garcia, their computer tech, is shot in the beginning and whisked off to a hospital. JJ and Hotch find out first and are the first ones in the hospital waiting area, soon followed by Reid. But while JJ has pretty much been fretting and keeping to herself, the moment Emily arrives, her demeanour changes: JJ does not even pay attention to Rossi who arrived with Emily, but her eyes dart to the other woman, and the two are next to each other in an instant.

A little while later one of the most revealing moments between Emily and JJ takes place. JJ is sitting in the hallway, deep in thought and a look of sadness on her face. Suddenly we learn that Emily sits beside her. She studies JJ's profile for a moment, clearly knowing exactly what the other woman is going through, and then she does the one thing that, in my mind, cements Emily/JJ as canon: Emily takes JJ's hand.


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And a collective squee of the fangirls could be heard around the world.

For me, probably the best thing about the hand holding is its effortlessness: Emily takes JJ's hand like it is the most natural thing in the world, and JJ's hand grabs Emily's in a way that gives the impression that she has done it countless times before. And we all know she has. I mean, please.

Due to the WGA writers' strike only twelve episodes of Season 3 has been filmed so far. This obviously means that some storylines were left hanging, and that the season ended rather abruptly (there is only one episode left as this manifesto is being written). But, in terms of Emily & JJ, the show’s ending did not disappoint.

While "True Night", the episode immediately following "Penelope", does not have many Emily/JJ scenes (besides JJ being distracted by Emily's sexy strut past her desk), "Birthright" brings on the subtext again.


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Besides the usual way-longer-than-necessary eye contact and wearing each other's clothes, we get physical contact which is nothing short of intimate: when JJ turns down the invitation to go for drinks with the rest of the team, Emily walks to her, puts a hand on her shoulder and rubs her arm in a loving manner while going "awww". And JJ acknowledges the gesture by almost leaning to it.

The interesting thing is that Emily is the only one who expresses her disappointment and actually physically touches JJ; the others do not even seem to care. I bet Emily will make it all up to her later on.


Profile This!


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After wading through all the episodes and analysing them to the best of my ability, I was extremely delighted to realise that my theory actually holds. The relationship between Emily and JJ starts building up slowly (just as any relationship, really), like such episodes as "Revelations" and "Open Season" demonstrate, but the pace soon speeds up.

By the beginning of Season 3, their relationship seems, if not established, then clearly on its way to that. Such flirting, longing looks and physical contact take place during the first half of the season that you would have to be blind not to see it.

Eye shagging, no personal space, unnecessary touching, pure flirting... It is all femslash 101 – no matter what way you look at it.


Immerse Yourself into the Fandom

A Few Ficrecs

Bend and Not Break by theclosetalker
Like This Insubstantial Pageant Faded by fewthistle
Plane Whispers by purplebrat
Predilection by Harper
Sorrow Is an Enemy by fewthistle
Target Practice by LeeT911
Three Things Jennifer Jareau Knew She Shouldnt Do by fewthistle
The Heart Knows by atfm


Videos & Art

All For Believing by [info]lysachan (shameless self-promotion, but what can you do when there are practically no vids out there?)
Nobody Knows It by ohsoleil
Unbound by [info]freya86

Wallpapers by Shaych


LJ Communities

[info]cm_femslash - Criminal Minds Femslash community
[info]criminalxminds - A General Criminal Minds community


Other Websites

Official CBS Website
Criminal Minds Fanatic



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[info]grumpybear1031
2007-12-28 05:53 pm UTC (link)
wow after reading that I really need to start watching Criminal Minds. I'm off now to see if I can find the first 2 seasons online anywhere. Thanks..

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 06:35 pm UTC (link)
Yes! My plan is working. *g* I hope you're able to find the episodes online; if not, let me know and I'm sure we can figure something out, heh.

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(no subject) - [info]grumpybear1031, 2007-12-30 06:41 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]vesikirppu, 2007-12-30 06:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]grumpybear1031, 2007-12-30 07:00 pm UTC
could i get that too? - [info]hynotic_n_crazy, 2008-03-30 09:12 am UTC
Re: could i get that too? - [info]vesikirppu, 2008-03-30 10:24 am UTC

[info]fewthistle
2007-12-28 06:26 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful, my dear!! I am so glad that someone, and the Queen of Picspam in particular, decided to put all of this down in words and pictures. There really is so little to doubt about the reality of this subtext (which isn't really subtext anymore).

It is so very clear that there is "something" there between them, some connection, some mutual regard that goes beyond the bounds of the usual workplace friendship. They simply look at each other too much (and clearly the producers want us to see how often they stare, and how often those stares are laced with emotion, or they simply wouldn't film them that way), and it makes it difficult for me to accept the idea that there isn't something far deeper going on between them.

These are usually the glances and smiles that are relegated to the "het" couple on any given show, leading up to the May sweeps that finds them locked in an embrace...or having sex, depending on the show *g*. Still, I can't help but feel a sense of inevitablity about this relationship. There have simply been too many scenes, too many looks, too many touches for it to less than what it appears to our eyes to be.

I have lots of work friends, women I have known for years. I don't look at them like Emily and JJ look at each other, I don't flirt with them (there is no other explaination for how JJ smiles and touches her lips in "Children of Darkness" other than intense flirting...and there is little way that I can honestly believe that AJ Cook could have done that without knowing what she was doing or how it looked. I just can't).

I don't smile at them with that look of longing and need in my eyes that these two always have. It just doesn't seem rational (and I am a very rational woman) to think that this is all happenstance. That the actresses don't know what they are doing or how they are behaving toward each other (and I know that Paget and AJ are both talented, intelligent women, so I can't see how that is possible). And the producers watch this show, they chose camera angles and shots and positioning of actors, they write the dialogue, they dictate how and when and why. So I can't quite wrap my mind around the idea that this is completely invisible to them or that they don't know exactly what they are doing.

I just can't.

Maybe I am deluded, but I don't think so.

As for the fic recs. My deepest gratitude for including some of mine. I'm very honored.

Thanks for doing this. Really. It's wonderful!

Edited at 2007-12-28 06:28 pm UTC

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[info]racethewind10
2007-12-28 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Well, let's put it this way..if you are deluded *looks around the [info]cm_femslash list....you're in good company! *eg*

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(no subject) - [info]vesikirppu, 2007-12-30 06:53 pm UTC

[info]ralst
2007-12-28 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Another great manifesto.

The progression of the relationship has been especially delightful, as it hassn't suffer the setbacks and mis-timings that seem to plague other femslash pairings. There are definite stages of intimacy, which makes it seem so much more believable, to me at least.

The holy trinity of episodes should be compulsive watching for all femslash fans and show writers.

Thanks

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

It is so true that the Emily/JJ relationship hasn't suffered the usual setbacks that can be found in, basically, any other fandom. Here's hoping the same trend continues.

Oh, yes. We should make everyone watch those three episodes. If you're not converted after that, there's something seriously wrong with you. *g*

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[info]kennedyismyhero
2007-12-28 07:02 pm UTC (link)
Yay! JJ/Emily rules all! Thanks for spreading the message/love!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:00 pm UTC (link)
You're very welcome! *g*

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[info]baggy7
2007-12-28 07:11 pm UTC (link)
This slays me! *flails & dies*

And now for some pointless rambling *clears throat*

Emily: JJ, look at me. Look at me.
This is my favourite JEm line ♥ Just how bad Emily wanted JJ to look at her, squeeee!!!

(JJ's hips are canted in a very sexy manner as she leans over a sink; how Emily is even able to form coherent sentences is beyond me)
LMAO! Emily was totally checking her out. I could see her drool...or was that me :P

Distress is love! I just go *thud* when I see the cute smile they pass each other, especially on Emily's face since Reid was giving her a tough time throughout the episode. So much love between those two <3

Oh they are doing it alright. They even wear the same colours in Identity which means they have been asking each other for tips.

An epic could be written on their eye-sex fest. Seriously. I'd be calling the cops if anyone looked at me the way JJ looks at Emily. Even if they don't have conversations, the looks between them more than makes up for it.

I've already gone on long enough on Penelope & the back-rub so I'll just shut up and read this manifesto again *g*

Thank you(& Shay)so much for doing this! :D

To quote you:
hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnh!!!


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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Hee! I'm very happy you liked the manifesto.

While I watched through all the episodes, the amount of eye shagging completely floored me. I mean, I knew about this trend before, but I had no memory it's this overt and common. Just...guh!

Take the plane scene for example: the very end when we only see Emily (who then turns to look out of the window), they're looking at each other forever; we just don't see JJ's face.

Anyway, thank you so much! I'm all giddy that people like this. *g*

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[info]kayryn
2007-12-28 07:59 pm UTC (link)
*Squeee!* Thanks so much for doing all this. Fabulous manifesto.

You know one of my favorite things is actually what Derek said to Reid in season 2 deleted scene... “Emily Prentiss is not the kinda girl who’s interested in Derek Morgan.”

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[info]racethewind10
2007-12-28 09:47 pm UTC (link)
*g* I always thought it was funny that when Derek talked about "snuggling up with a little 'Halloween hunny," Emily got grossed out. ;p

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(no subject) - [info]vesikirppu, 2007-12-30 07:09 pm UTC
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[info]val_120
2007-12-28 08:11 pm UTC (link)
O.M.G
amazing and sooo true <3

thanks so much for doing this manifesto, it was perfectly written

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

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[info]dani_po
2007-12-28 08:28 pm UTC (link)
Wonderfull Manifesto
And so true about the eye shagging and zero personal space
They are totally doing it!
THANK YOU!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *g*

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[info]theclosetalker
2007-12-28 09:22 pm UTC (link)
This really sums up why I'm so into them. And why I think it's so *obvious* that they're together. The looks, the touches, the clothes sharing - they're so doing it.

I'd kill to know how much of that is in the script, and how much of it is a conscious effort on AJ and Paget's parts, and how much of it is just plain chemistry. But whatever's behind it, it's subtle and deep and beautiful.

Thank you for putting this together! It was a nice refresher course and has made me feel exceptionally ficcy.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! If this means we'll get more fic from you, I'm completely satisfied. *g*

Someone posted scripts (1st drafts, or the like) of the episodes online a while back, during Season 2, and at least those didn't have much "extra" besides the lines. They only had things like "(Hotch turns to face him)" etc. included, but maybe the final version is more detailed than that. Anyway, I'd kill to know that as well!

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[info]tremblingmoon
2007-12-28 09:26 pm UTC (link)
This is fantastic! I've already seen all these episodes except the last, but this makes me want to go back and watch them all again. I'm with [info]fewthistle: I can't possibly believe that no one on the production end has any idea what's going on between JJ and Emily on screen. How can two actors flirt like that constantly and not know what they're up to?

Excellent job. Love this!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:20 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! It makes me happy to know people like the manifesto.

Yes, it seems downright impossible that people wouldn't notice all the subtext. Maybe they're in denial. Or blind. Or both, heh. The plane scene is such a great example of this, though: how come no one realised the flirty looks, JJ touching her lips, the smiles... It's just not possible not to notice.

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[info]racethewind10
2007-12-28 09:45 pm UTC (link)
very nice!! And I have to second [info]fewthistle and [info]tremblingmoon they can't be that clueles, so here's to hoping it continues. And in the end *shrug* WE know what we see, and there are some very talented writers/visual media people out there who will just (hopefully) keep filling in the blanks.

Thanks for posting the manifesto, its detailed and hilarious and has great picevidence!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:23 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

Obviously I also hope this femslashy trend continues, were they aware of the trend or not. It'd be rather cool, though, if it was a conscious decision and they kept including all the subtext like the writers of Xena back in the day, heh.

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[info]maroukian
2007-12-28 11:25 pm UTC (link)
This is too good. I chuckled all the way through it saying things like: well, I'll be darned, she's right! :)

Well written and incredibly cute.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:23 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *g*

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[info]gespawcho
2007-12-28 11:54 pm UTC (link)
[info]theclosetalker and I are discussing this right now and I just finished telling her that despite the fact that I've been convinced of the canonical veracity of this pairing since she first told me so, it is damned near impossible to look at this and not be convinced even more.

This is a compelling, airtight argument when it's all compiled like this in one place. No way *all* of the above could be unintentional, or coincidental, or simply excellent chemistry on the part of the actors.

Well done!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:27 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *g* I'm more than happy to know that this works as a convincing piece of evidence about the nature of their relationship. Here's hoping they will keep the femslash coming!

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[info]darandkerry
2007-12-28 11:58 pm UTC (link)
Eye shagging, no personal space, unnecessary touching, pure flirting... It is all femslash 101 – no matter what way you look at it.

And thanks to this wonderful manifesto, all of the above prerequisites to femslash were brought to light in a most spectacular way. A brilliantly conceived plan carried out masterfully with each and every facet of their growing relationship proven beyond a shadow of a doubt to be quite real through the use of incriminating dialogue and photos. Amazing work; very well done.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Wow, thank you so much! I'm very happy you think the manifesto works, and that it lays out all the evidence in a coherent and understandable manner.

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[info]kjaneway
2007-12-29 12:02 am UTC (link)
Wow! Seriously good job. So much detail. Wow.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]diane_nipson14
2007-12-29 12:24 am UTC (link)
Excellent manifesto. I've followed the femslash pairings on several shows over the years, and I still think CM has one of the best pairings with Emily and JJ.
Your comment about the scene in "Revelations" with JJ leaning over the sink was on the mark. I was also thinking the primetime viewers didn't get a chance to see the full-length unrated director's cut for that particular scene. LOL.
Your wardrobe swapping and dirty text message observation was hilarious. Who wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of a text message from Special Agent Prentiss! JJ is one lucky gal. Subtext is so much fun.
Happy New Year!

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *g*

I definitely agree: Emily/JJ is one of the best femslash parings on TV in a while. There's something real and genuine about those two, something that most other parings seem to be lacking.

And oh! Emily could send me text messages anytime, heh.

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[info]shaych_03
2007-12-29 12:29 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you put this all together. It is even easier to read between the frames and see the truth written so plainly therein.

I'm beginning to see the subtext on CM as a bit like season 1 Xena. The subtleties are as blindingly obvious when viewed as a whole.

And while there's quite likely a huge influence of the "chemistry" factor (No Great subtext pairing works without it), there certainly has to be some design as well. Even if all that was meant to be implied was the "family" vibe... the "family" in question seems to fall a bit more on the Rainbow tinged side of the aisle.

I really can't wait to see what the rest of Season Three will bring... given the massive break the writers have had... there should be some interesting storylines to come.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for your help in this! It always clarifies things when you bounce ideas back and forth etc.
The subtext really is unbelievably overt. It still amazes me, after all this analysing and writing, heh.

I really can't wait for the new episodes either! Now, if the network people would only give the writers what they want...

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[info]aleatory_6
2007-12-29 12:58 am UTC (link)
Wow. Amazing. Don't watch the show (network tv *shudder*) but will happily follow the growth of this pairing through your eyes and others'. Must say that I feel a kinship with those that dedicate themselves to milking every last drop of subtext out of veiled (and sometimes overt) reference! It's a sport close to my own heart. :) Keep on keeping on.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:54 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! You know, you could give this show a chance and actually watch it... *g*

Subtext spotting is so my favourite sport, heh. Honestly, sometimes I realise that I can't watch television or movies without my femslash goggles on. I'm not sure if that's an entirely good thing.

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[info]eclecticfan
2007-12-29 02:13 am UTC (link)
awesome

simply, awesome

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:54 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *g*

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[info]tehdeadringer
2007-12-29 03:22 am UTC (link)
I've read a few manifestos in my days here and i must say, this is my favorite by far! Everything was spot on and exactly what i thought would have said, and have said. The scene in "Revelations" - yeah, i think i actually stopped breathing then, i don't know how anyone talked to her at the time.
Everything was really prefect. I loved it, thanks sooo much.

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:55 pm UTC (link)
Wow, thank you so much! *blush* I'm glad you enjoyed the manifesto!

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[info]calliopes_muse
2007-12-29 05:24 am UTC (link)
Aughh, must get and watch the first two seasons now. I've caught a couple of season 3 epis and think I'm starting to get hooked. :)

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[info]vesikirppu
2007-12-30 07:58 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Criminal Minds is an extremely addictive show, but definitely worth it all. *g*

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[info]yukivampyra
2007-12-30 10:07 pm UTC (link)
I totally agree with you about Revelations. The rest of it, too, of course, but especially that particular episode. Awesome manifesto.

Another thing I've noticed is that after Revelations, Reid seems particularly hostile towards Emily. In early season one it was established that he and JJ might become canon (which is shudder inducing), so when she started showing more interest in Emily than in him...
Of course, it could all be in my head, too.

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[info]vesikirppu
2008-01-01 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

I think the writers meant that Reid was hostile towards Emily because she could see right through him and his bullsh*t (the drugs etc.). But now that you mentioned it, it could be seen as a counter-reaction to JJ paying more attention to Emily. *g*

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[info]unmellow_yellow
2007-12-31 03:59 am UTC (link)
You are awesome. This was awesome. That is all.

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[info]vesikirppu
2008-01-01 04:48 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow. Thank you so much!

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[info]s0phi4
2007-12-31 05:18 am UTC (link)
Wow. This is incredibly awesome. If I didn't already ship them, this would have convinced me to.

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[info]vesikirppu
2008-01-01 04:48 pm UTC (link)
So my plan is working. *g* Thank you so much!

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[info]emthefrootloop
2007-12-31 06:05 am UTC (link)
Someone had to write it, and i'm glad it was you! Love the detail ... and JJ's 'profile' pic is so cute ... she's almost chubby :o

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[info]vesikirppu
2008-01-01 04:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I have a soft spot for that JJ pic as well. The "chubbiness" might be due to lighting, though.

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